Twas a week after the pummeling... (a victory rhyme)

[Aqua Shadow]

Twas a week after the pummeling,
and all through the house,
All the Dol-fans were still cheering,
Even the mouse.

38 to 13still ringing in their ears,
Where art thou Brady, was causing patriot tears.

Ronnie ran for 4, threw for 1 too,
Touchdowns galore, Oh and the Patriots lose too!

Sparano and the staff Coached 'em up good,
4 sacks and a pick, made Belicheat look like he had to poo!

As patriot fans pile out of their own stadium, leavin'
Dol-fans are screamin' "we matched last seasons record, maybe we can stop the bleedin'"!.

I pretty much got the idea from the thread titled, "Twas the night before game day".

If you have any improvements post them and make them if you wish. Other variations can be made, or even make up your very own victory rhyme!

Go Phins!

 

[Duriel]

Bravo!

 

[CitizenSnips]

you rhymed too...with too...

impressive.

 

[Vaark]

 

[rkit55]

hahahahahahahahahaha brilliant!

 

[ojmcduffy]

roses are red voilets are blue
the patriots suck
and the jets do to

 

[tmny99]

good job

 

[Predaphin]

Twas a week after the pummeling,
and all through the house,
All the Dol-fans were still cheering,
Even the mouse.

38 to 13still ringing in their ears,
Where art thou Brady, was causing patriot tears.

Ronnie ran for 4, threw for 1 too,
Touchdowns galore, Oh and the Patriots lose too!

Sparano and the staff Coached 'em up good,
4 sacks and a pick, made Belicheat look like he had to poo!

As patriot fans pile out of their own stadium, leavin'
Dol-fans are screamin' "we matched last seasons record, maybe we can stop the bleedin'"!.

I pretty much got the idea from the thread titled, "Twas the night before game day".

If you have any improvements post them and make them if you wish. Other variations can be made, or even make up your very own victory rhyme!

Go Phins!

LMAO! that was good

 

[MiamiDolfan85]

roses are red voilets are blue
the patriots suck
and the jets do to

i got a poem similar too yours....

roses are red violets are blue
the patriots suck
the jets n' bills too!

 

[ZILLA]

jingle bells brady smells
belicheck laid an egg
the patriots D couldnt stop RB and cassel couldnt play dead

 

[bpackers13]

I hate the Pats and I can not lie
With a camera in BBs eye
With that big round face, and a Q-B disgrace. I get sprung.


Thats all I can come up with

 

[PerfectFinz72]

roses are red voilets are blue
the patriots suck
and the jets do to

Nicely done. :up:

 

[Dfootball11]

as the writer of "twas the night before gameday" im glad to see my thread has lived on in a new thread.. hahaha good job!!

 

[Dolpfan_72]

Twas a week after the pummeling,
and all through the house,
All the Dol-fans were still cheering,
Even the spouse.

38 to 13 still ringing in their ears,
A year without Brady was causing Patriot tears.

Ronnie ran for 4, threw for 1 too,
Touchdowns galore, made the cheers turn to boos!

Sparano and the staff Coached the game well,
4 sacks and a pick, Matt Cassel was in hell.

As Patriots fans file quietly out of Gillete,
One has to wonder how many lost bets.

So a word of advice to the AFC East,
You'll never beat the Dolphins unless you can cheat.

Go Phins!

-thanks to 1 dol fan for the original post-

 

[Aqua Shadow]

^ that was a much cleaned up version! it flowed better than the original did!

How long did it take you to get it to rhyme so well?