I like your draft but I would like something like this:
1st rd pick: Donte Whitner OSU 5'-11" 204lbs 40Time-4.41 sec
Developing defensive back slowly turning into a complete player. Fast, explosive at the point and not afraid to mix it up. Supports the run and wraps up tackling. Displays a good sense of timing, recognizes patterns in zone coverage and possesses good hands for the pick. Solid footwork in all directions.
3rd RD pick: Mark Anderson DE/OLB Alabama: 6'-4" 254lbs 40- 4.65sec
Athletic defensive end with terrific upside potential. Plays with good pad level, fluid out to the sidelines and fast off the edge. Effective playing in space, resilient and is rarely off his feet. Deceptively strong and stays within his angle of attack.
Neg: Lacks bulk and has difficulty shedding blocks once engaged at the point.
Analysis: Shooting straight up draft boards, Anderson capped off a terrific campaign in ‘05 with solid performances at the Senior Bowl and combine. Offers starting potential in a conventional defense and may ultimately grow into a two-gap lineman.
4th RD Todd Watkins WR BYU: 6'-3" 202lbs 40- 4.45sec
Explosive, game-breaking receiver coming off a disappointing senior campaign. Quickly releases off the line of scrimmage, displays sharpness running routes and comes back to the ball out of breaks. Effectively makes the reception away from his frame then quickly transitions after the catch. Has the speed to consistently beat defenders deep. Runs well laterally, making the reception in stride.
The scouting info. above are snipets from TFY Draft Preview. If I posted something illegally let me know.